there is a place 
that I cross
when I feel lonely.
where moon greets midnight
and curls of delicate green 
glow silver, 
where trailing jasmine tendrils,
reserve their fragrance,
to bloom for the night.
here lives the magic
a child might feel
here, lays my affair 
with time and seclusion
here leaps dancing visions, 
brief flirtations...
 a pact
 sworn to secrecy 
into the late of night
 in repose, I spy 
fireflies, flitting by
and with each visit
I catch the stars
twinkling...
a knowing look in their eyes.
-lyra okita
I'm in love with this poem. Everything fits together and as you read each line, it flows. Really an amazing job Lyra!
ReplyDeleteDamn, this is some spicy poetry right here.
ReplyDelete10/10 would enjoy again
fantastic use of imagery and pizzazz
theres innocence to it that makes me happy
ReplyDeleteI really liked your usage of effective line breaks and vivid sensory detail. I love the last line. Awesome poem! The tone is really cool too.
ReplyDeleteI like the use of sensory detail. I especially like "where moon greets midnight
ReplyDeleteand curls of delicate green glow silver". This poem is really brought together. Good job!