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Thursday, May 25, 2017

counting stars


there is a place
that I cross
when I feel lonely.
where moon greets midnight
and curls of delicate green
glow silver,
where trailing jasmine tendrils,
reserve their fragrance,
to bloom for the night.


here lives the magic
a child might feel
here, lays my affair
with time and seclusion
here leaps dancing visions,
brief flirtations...
a pact
sworn to secrecy
into the late of night


in repose, I spy
fireflies, flitting by
and with each visit
I catch the stars
twinkling...
a knowing look in their eyes.

-lyra okita

5 comments:

  1. I'm in love with this poem. Everything fits together and as you read each line, it flows. Really an amazing job Lyra!

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  2. Damn, this is some spicy poetry right here.

    10/10 would enjoy again

    fantastic use of imagery and pizzazz

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  3. theres innocence to it that makes me happy

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  4. I really liked your usage of effective line breaks and vivid sensory detail. I love the last line. Awesome poem! The tone is really cool too.

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  5. I like the use of sensory detail. I especially like "where moon greets midnight
    and curls of delicate green glow silver". This poem is really brought together. Good job!

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