When I wake up in the morning I feel
So tired.
And when it comes to the choice,
Of what I’ll wear today,
Well
It just seems to me that I could be
Really quite free.
It doesn’t matter so much
What I look like and see?
It’s not like I’m a portly polished man
So I slip on some clothes
Without much worry to how it “flows”
I drag myself to the mirror
And see my face
Oh dear
Well I guess I shouldn’t try
I say to myself with a sigh
I would be lying if I said
That I tried to fix my head
Now that that’s all done
I step out the door
Shoot.
I haven’t shaved.
Oh, what a chore.
But it’s too late now
So I continue on my way
I’ll figure it out tomorrow, I say
And just let it be today
I really liked how your use of repetition with the word tired, and it's funny but, I could read it in your voice. lol
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I like how your poem isn't too serious. It really stands out.
ReplyDeleteThe usage of rhyme was very funny to me, as it made the poem very humorous. My favorite line was the final line, as not only did it rhyme, but it wrapped up the poem very well.
ReplyDeleteI really like your use of rhyme it really fits your theme. My favorite line is "I'll figure it out tomorrow, I'll say." I really like how your poem is funny and light.
ReplyDeleteI like that your poem is very light hearted, and is very funny. I like the end when you say "and let it just be today" because it conveys a message while still being a funny poem
ReplyDeleteI like how your poem wasn't "indignant" and pretty funny. I especially liked the last stanza, because it successfully conveys the carefree and laid-back tone of your poem.
ReplyDeletethose last three lines are golden, great poem.
ReplyDeleteThis is very relaxed, it rolls off of the tongue well.
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