Ode to my Laptop
A glossy square of metal
Containing an ocean of information
So large
And so diverse
I could spend a lifetime engulfed in its depths.
One tap of a button,
And I am immersed into another world,
With characters and language
Unlike any I have ever seen.
Your ever changing screen can provide
endless enjoyable hours of entertainment
At will.
Your soothing hum
Like that of a content cat
Warms both my lap,
And my heart.
Oh Laptop,
You are a faithful companion,
A knowledgeable seer,
And an unbeatable bard.
But above all,
You are a chance for me to escape the real world
And fall into
a sea of satisfaction.
a sea of satisfaction.
I really like how you compare the laptop to a content cat because it is very relatable and a good use of simile.
ReplyDeleteThis was a really creative poem, I like how you thanked your laptop for letting you "escape the real world." I also like the structure of your poem.
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