I live in the United States of America
The greatest country in the world
We are the best in everything we do
But we are in a crisis
I used to live in Darayya Syria, a suburb of Damascus
It was a beautiful place with great people
Everyone worked hard in everything they did
But we are in a crisis
America has an immigration crisis
We are being infiltrated by criminals, rapists, and murderers
Syria has a humanitarian crisis
We are being slaughtered and beaten by the ones we once trusted
We cannot let these people in
They are going to take what is ours
I need to leave this wretched land
I don’t need much, I just ask for safety
These intruders are going to destroy our home
I want to come to the land of opportunity so I can live in peace
These terrorists are taking what is rightfully ours
I’m a father of three and worked as doctor back in Syria
They don’t deserve to be in our great country
I want to be apart of the American dream
How dare they think they can be one of us
When they were raised in the hands of heathens
I left everything in hope of asylum
They can go anywhere else
The only door open is the land of the free
They will put a stain on our beloved homeland
I will clean any injustice I see
What problems do they have?
I’m lucky. I made it out before the doors shut
I lost my coal mining job
I am fortunate to have found a refugee camp in Jordan
I’ve been unemployed for 3 years
My wife was murdered
I only have a one story house
They gave us a whole room for my family
Luckily we have a man who will open the doors for us
Unfortunately, there is a man who thinks he knows all
Who does what he wants
Without a worry in who gets locked out
Thank God we have a man listening to our demands
Keeping out what doesn’t belong
I don’t understand why they are locking the doors
And throwing the keys away
We will keep America safe
We have done everything in the pursuit of America
They are confusing us with dissident rebels
They are all dangerous and hateful
We are peaceful
The terrorists use the Muslim faith as a guise to excuse their actions
All immigrants are trying to destroy America
We are escaping destruction and
Fighting for a new life
If we keep them out
We will be safe
We need to keep them out
Please let us in
This poem was really powerful and well-written. I especially appreciated the last line ("Please let us in") because it portrayed the struggle and desperation in a concise yet effective way. I'm sure the performance version adds to the gravity of the poem even more. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWow this was a really powerful poem. I really liked the two perspectives and seeing both sides of the story. Your poem spoke a lot of truth especially about issues we see today. Good job!!
ReplyDeleteThis was a really good informed poem. It really shows the two sides of an issue that is very much a part of all our lives. Very well written.
ReplyDeleteI really like the change of perspective throughout the poem and can see how in performance the poem will be portrayed very well. My favorite line is the last line "Please let us in" in contrast to the stanza before it to really emphasize the hopelessness and desperation the italicized lines convey.
ReplyDeleteThe split perspective does a great job at showing the separation of people and their opposing viewpoints and backgrounds. Overall this is a very powerful poem and a poignant commentary on the ideals that some people have
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