Hoodie
You stayed by my side.
I carried you everywhere.
You warmed my soul,
And I reciprocated your affection.
One gloomy morning, I awoke,
Looking around for your vibrant glow,
But you were no longer there.
I screamed, knowing no other reaction.
I yelled and whined for what seemed like days.
I listened to my mother’s stomps, motivated by
The unnerving and unanticipated commotion,
And then the realization hit me like a brick wall:
Her kindness was my demise.
I watched you spin with the water.
Round, and round, and round again,
Not knowing when the rotating would cease.
You were trapped in a metal cage,
And no matter how much I mustered,
I could not free you from that hell.
Every cycle, I listened to you swish and thud.
I listened to your silent cries for help,
And with every revolution, I watched
As our adventures together washed away.
"Fear not," my mother whispered.
"You will be reunited one day."
I nodded blindly to her blatant lies,
Eyes glued to my whirling red mess.
As the swishing slowed,
And the timer finally ticked down to zero,
I gingerly picked up my lifeless hoodie,
Dripping water like tears falling from my cheek,
Knowing my true love would never be the same.
And then I threw it in the dryer.
I really love who over dramatic the poem is and how it ends with your last line. It is great to see the final version of it and I think it was very well written.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is so great. I love how the last line ends it.
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem. I feel connected to the jacket myself now. "Dripping water like tears falling from my check" great great line
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ReplyDeleteMy favorite line is the "I nodded blindly to her blatant lies." Great poem
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