Those empty promises that filled my head
the countless words I held close to my heart.
You lied to me.
Sweet revenge would have done well
but no, I have something else in mind.
As time passes, I will continue to haunt you.
I will continue to watch you
as you scream in terror.
Sweet revenge would have done so well
but no, something else is better.
From afar you will see the fire blazing
right before your fearful, quivering eyes.
Watching all the horror and terror
letting them immerse your mind.
Sweet revenge would have done well
but no, there is something else that will do.
The darkness and despair will take care of you
just like how you took care of me.
Those empty promises that filled my head.
Sweet revenge will finally serve you well.
I like how you repeated revenge, It really suited the poem, and the tone of this poem. I also like the picture you included. :)
ReplyDeleteI love the really strong diction you used which adds to how you're feeling and the intensity of the poem.
ReplyDeleteI like how powerful and strong the poem comes off to the reader. It really submerges me into the mood and feelings of the narrator. My favorite line was from afar you will see the fire blazing
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