Walls
Night and Day
When the lights shine on you
You must be ready
Know your limits
Know your strengths
Know your weaknesses
Push Your limits
Push your strengths
Push your weaknesses
Turn your fear into motivation
Break down the walls
The wall of fear
The wall of tiredness
The wall of pain
Once there are no more walls to break down
You are ready
Show the work that you have made in the darkness
Bring it to the light
Your use of repetition as a theme does a great job of showing your understanding of the Tao te ching.
ReplyDeleteI think that your poem sounds like a very inspiring poem for people who would give up or push themselves too far.
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