When you recognize your mistakes
You may find yourself dwelling on the passed
You are not the agony you feel
Nor are you the memories
You must accept your failures first
Then father time will follow in your footsteps
The sand in the hour glass will fall
But you must hold your head up high
Tick
Tock
Tick
Tock
Tick
Tock
Time will stop
But you will go on
You must ignore the clock ticking
You must ignore the time lost
You must ignore the time lost
You must become one with yourself
You must become Tao
I like the rhythm of the poem, and the message that you send.
ReplyDeleteI think this sends an interesting message in an effective way, and it has a nice rhythm.
ReplyDeleteThe formatting of the poem is great. I love the one word lines emphasizing the time passing and words.
ReplyDeleteI like the use of time. very well done
ReplyDeleteI like the use of time. very well done
ReplyDeleteI like the use of time. very well done
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