I am not
A simple book
To be read, no
Take me in
Embellish my pages
Scrawl murmurs into the deepest recesses of my covers
Fold my pages
And tear them out
Burn them
And watch my words escape into the air
Soak them in water
And watch my words dissolve into nothingness
And in
Drinking my knowledge
You take it in
To be sought
And loved
I am
A simple book
To be read
Really well done, the visual imagery is really well done. I love the word nothingness too, if it's a word, it's great either way. Overall I enjoyed the way you thought about reading it gave me a new perspective on it.
ReplyDeleteI really like the rhythm of the poem. It is simple to read, and the flow is great. You took this to a whole new level and perspective.
ReplyDeleteThe imagery in this poem is powerful and effective. The line breaks were clearly thought out well, and so was the structure and organization. I loved the symbolism as well.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is so descriptive and I love the concept you chose to write about. You used imagery is the poem and it was really effective.
ReplyDeleteYour line breaks were effective, made the poem engaging, and expressed your message clearly. I also loved the symbolism and how that helped express your message.
ReplyDeleteI liked how unique this poem was from others and the strong use of imagery. The picture was also perfect in matching with the poem's meaning.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you described a simple book with imagery. There was rhythm and symbolism. Great job! Really enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteI loved your creative poetic rhythm and how you gave the book so much symbolism and expressed the possibilities reading can offer. Your imagery and figurative language really enhanced the symbolism.
ReplyDeleteI really like the line breaks and the rhythm of the poem. It is simple, but has a deep message to it and you expressed it very well.
ReplyDeletei like the simplicity and the uniquness
ReplyDeleteI love the rhythm and how great this poem flows. It has a really good message and you conveyed it subtly and really well.
ReplyDeleteHI YALDA I really liked how your poem was so short and easy to read, yet it's still able to convey your message so well. You're amazing.
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