everyday part of the world is destroyed
everyday we look on the news
to see burning houses
and crying children
the world is being torn apart
little by little
we all know that
one day the world will eventually
disappear by our hands
our decisions
our choices
is what determines the future
there is no turning back
the world is moving at a faster pace
each time we advance
soon we will never catch up
never solve all the riddles
and all the problems
that circulate and balance
our life
we must not recklessly
make our decisions
our choices
and rather think carefully
to walk in the right direction
we must keep ourselves composed
and not lose our sense of humanity
to create a more advanced
and peaceful society
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ReplyDeleteI like your choice of syntax: personally, it makes the message seem more rounded and powerful. The picture also really captures the essence of the poem.
ReplyDeleteI like your message a lot. I hold saving the world and helping everyone on it very dear to my heart as well. I agree, we have to be conscious of our decisions and protect the earth.
ReplyDeleteHey now, humans cant destroy the world. ourselves maybe, but earth? Na
ReplyDeleteHey now, humans cant destroy the world. ourselves maybe, but earth? Na
ReplyDeleteHi Claire. I really like how you used examples of real life situations to convey your message. Also, I agree that people need to pay more attention to their actions in order to have a more peaceful world.
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